Feedback:
"Orlando is a big destination for tourists. And, true, that if more bus opportunities from Orlando to other popular tourist destinations existed by bus, there would be more opportunities for the tourists to visit more destinations in Florida and that would also create more job opportunities for the bus drivers that would deliver them to their destinations." - Gregory, Classmate
I didn't get as much feedback as I would of liked but I did receive a good one from a classmate, Gregory. I liked what he said about having more routes in terms of buses and I agree that the opportunities for tourists would grow if more bus routes were created.
What did you change based on feedback?:
Since I didn't receive feedback on the actual video, I went ahead and critiqued myself and found several things that I did not like about my first pitch video.
1.) I thought the recording of the volume was not as loud as I liked it to be
2.) The color of the dress shirt made the room darker
3.) Stumbled words and messed up couple times.
The Change
On this second video, I tried to address the problems that were apparent in my first video.
1.) Spoke louder so that it can be heard better
2.) Changed the dress shirt to white
3.) Tried to memorize more of the pitch rather than reading it from the screen.
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