I received some very great feed back from my peers and I tried once again to make my pitch a bit better. The classmates really thought that my third pitch was done the best due to my body language and little changed I made. They mentioned that the confidence was there and my body language helped create that. They also thought that the whiter shirt was the better choice go with but in this weeks pitch, I had to go back to my blue dress shirt because the white shirt was at the cleaners.
What did you change based on feedback?:
I really wanted to wear the white dress shirt for our last pitch but was not able to wear it. Like my classmate, I thought the white was the better choice to go with since it was lighter color and it helped deliver my message in a brighter light. I also zoomed in a little bit more in to make my facial expressions a bit more clear. I thought my 2nd and 3rd pitch it was a bit too far out.
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